My writing this term!

Kia orana everyone and happy cook island week! For writing we have been looking on watching a video called The Present and we can only retell the story in 100 words or less than 100 words. I really enjoyed making this but it was quite tricky, but I made the story first then shortened it down. Here is my writing down below. Jacob was playing his video games in the living room, when his mum came in and put a box on the table. ‘Here is a present for you Jacob, come on open it!’ So he opened the box and a little doggo started barking, Jacob said ‘Aww so cute, a puppy!’ Jacob said while holding the puppy. But guess what, she was missing a leg! He picked up the puppy then threw it out of his hands! Carefully the puppy walked up to Jacob and wanted to play! Jacob felt horrible, so he went outside with the puppy happily! Have you ever been limited in words for writing? Bye blog you later!