Thursday, 20 May 2021

My descriptive writing.

 

Here is some of my descriptive writing!
It did not take long. And we had to read it then we had to use voice detector to make it work.
If you got to describe it what would you write?
Bye bye blog you later!
Emma

6 comments:

  1. Hi Emma my name is Hibiscus I'm from Rm 6.
    I really like your post it so cool you should keep up this post you do really great job at it. I like your writing and I like how you are like talking about like what he looks like and what he's doing.
    When did you come up with your writing?
    Blog ya later!!!

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    1. Hi Hibiscus,
      Thank you for the wonderful feed back! And I will not take the post down. And I came up with my writing a few weeks ago. Also thank you writing on my blog.
      Blog you later!

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  2. Hi my name is Archie i am room 23. Wow you done some good writing you have done a good job on this and it looks like you have put lots of time on this and just remember to stay safe

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    1. Hello Archie,
      Thank you for commenting on my blog! Yes I did spend not a lot of time but not that much time just a little bit.
      What is your favourite about it?
      Bye bye!
      Emma

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  3. Hi my name is Paeton, I am from room 23. i really like you writing about the troll. Did you think about what the troll was doing. great job have a good and amazing day blog you later

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    1. Hello Paeton!
      Thank you for commenting on my blog! I am not sure what I was thinking when I was writing this because it was a while ago but I was probably was super focused and thinking what I was going to write!
      What do you like about it?
      Bye blog you later!
      Emma

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